The Weary Knight

by PerditusSeptember 2, 2020September 1, 2020

Weary

the old grey knight

hangs up his sword

his shield

in the shape of a kite

🌑

Days

of conflict past

As he looks back

on life

he is downcast

🌑

War

is all he has known

killing

blood

bone

🌑

Reflecting

on what he has been

he sees his life

existence

all as unclean

🌑

Overwhelmed

by the feeling

he promises himself

that the rest of his life

will be devoted to healing

🌑

He cannot

undo what has been done

but he will try

every day

he has breath under the sun

24 Comments

Offshorewriter on July 16, 2020 at 12:48 am
Reply

This is awesome. Loved it!

LikeLiked by 1 person
1. Stuart on July 16, 2020 at 8:14 am
  Reply
  
  Thank you! 😊
  
  LikeLike
Lia on July 16, 2020 at 8:19 am
Reply

Wonderful, Stuart!! Funny, I had a dream along these lines. Beautiful poem!! 💛

LikeLiked by 1 person
1. Stuart on July 16, 2020 at 8:26 am
  Reply
  
  Thank you! It’s weird how sometimes these coincidences pop up! 😊
  
  LikeLiked by 1 person
  1. Lia on July 16, 2020 at 8:27 am
    
    Yes, it’s the poetic collective consciousness. :)) And well these topics are of course universal and on all of our minds right now.
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person
  2. Stuart on July 16, 2020 at 8:29 am
    
    I like to think it’s the collective consciousness, I adore that idea 😊
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person
  3. Lia on July 16, 2020 at 8:30 am
    
    😚😚🌿💛🤗
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person
  4. Stuart on July 16, 2020 at 8:34 am
    
    😊
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person
d.a.simpsonwriter on July 16, 2020 at 5:28 pm
Reply

Superb!

LikeLiked by 1 person
1. Stuart on July 16, 2020 at 5:41 pm
  Reply
  
  Thank you! 😊
  
  LikeLike
  1. d.a.simpsonwriter on July 17, 2020 at 3:44 pm
    
    You’re welcome.
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person
  2. Stuart on July 17, 2020 at 3:44 pm
    
    😊
    
    LikeLike
blindzanygirl on July 16, 2020 at 6:03 pm
Reply

I’m sure there is a colkective unconscious. Beautiful poem Stuart

LikeLiked by 1 person
1. Stuart on July 16, 2020 at 6:06 pm
  Reply
  
  There is definitely something! Thank you for your lovely comment 😊
  
  LikeLiked by 1 person
  1. blindzanygirl on July 16, 2020 at 6:08 pm
    
    You are very welcome Stuart 😊
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person
  2. Stuart on July 16, 2020 at 6:09 pm
    
    😊
    
    LikeLike
Halbarbera on July 17, 2020 at 1:07 pm
Reply

Excellent! Like the weary knight trying to make things right.

LikeLiked by 1 person
1. Stuart on July 17, 2020 at 1:20 pm
  Reply
  
  Thank you! 😊
  
  LikeLiked by 1 person
mrsmariposa2014 on September 2, 2020 at 1:44 am
Reply

Oh, wow. Love this and the story you were able to unfold from one picture! You have quite a gift for that!

LikeLiked by 1 person
1. Stuart on September 2, 2020 at 8:14 am
  Reply
  
  Thank you for your lovely comment. Glad you liked! 😊
  
  LikeLiked by 1 person
forresting365 on September 14, 2020 at 4:53 pm
Reply

This is lovely, Stuart. Thank You. 💖

LikeLiked by 1 person
1. Stuart on September 14, 2020 at 5:02 pm
  Reply
  
  You’re welcome and thank you 😊
  
  LikeLiked by 1 person
  1. forresting365 on September 15, 2020 at 11:01 am
    
    My pleasure! 🤗❤️😊
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person
  2. Stuart on September 15, 2020 at 11:03 am
    
    😊
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person

The Weary Knight

Share this:

Like this:

24 Comments

Leave a Reply Cancel reply