
As dew drips off a leaf
the tears trickle down her face
A gentle flowing stream
becomes a waterfall of emotion
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As the sun rises in the morn
a smile blossoms on her face
The new dawn becomes
the glorious midday sun
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For these were tears of joy
Beautifully penned😀
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Thank you 😊
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This is amazing
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Beautifully evoked
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It’s a pleasure
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Hey, please check out my posts on my site. It’ll be great. I have just started and I need the page to grow.
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Definitely will do! 😊
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Thank you 😊😊
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Vivid imagination 👍
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gorgeous writing Stuart. The type of writing that made me nominate you for a sunshine blogger award. Check it out here https://thepoetspeace.wordpress.com/2020/06/30/sunshine-blogger-award-3/
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Thank you Lazarus! 😊
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very welcome
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Just gorgeous, Stuart. I love the ending which is what makes it so special. So often we assume tears of emotion are for sadness, and often women are written in the third person in a way that makes them seem broken or wanting. This poem turns the stereotypes around completely. Love. 🌅💧🧡🔆
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Thank you for your lovely words Lia. I’m really pleased that you liked it 😊
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As usual, a lovely recollection of true life experiences……I am a male, and I’ve had moments like this. Thank you for the wonderful memories you invoke……..keep on….keeping on…….
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Thank you so much for you lovely comment 😊
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My pleasure……you are worthy to be honored in such a way! All the best…….
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It’s okay to cry sometimes. Wonderful piece 🌻
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Beautifully penned
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That’s quite a wonderful poem and the end makes me gasp ! 👍🤝
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment 😊
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Amazing ,love your way of writing .😍
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Thank you for your lovely comment 😊
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