The raging noise
rapid white water thrashing
rocks cascading down
The melancholic cavern roof
cannot be seen
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For the darkness is suffocating
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There is
an eerie feeling of being watched
an unseen presence felt
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For within the darkness two large eyes
observe
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The cavern dragon is here
Or might it be a monster, which is so much worse.
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Thatβs true! π
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A wonderful image. Makes your imagination run wild.
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Thank you π
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Cavern dragon! Haha π
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Dramatic! Great poetry!
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Thank you! π
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Excellent Poem. I’ve nominated you for a Blogging Award…
https://supernaturalhippie.com/2020/03/09/ive-been-nominated-for-the-mystery-blogger-award/
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Thank you! π
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No worries. You have Mysterious Poems so thought you were a good candidate for this award. I posted it on your Hermit poem. But I don’t know if people see all their comments. No need to partake if it’s not your thing. But there if you want it. π
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Thank you again. Iβll have a look, itβs much appreciated! π
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This gives me the creeps…haha!
Wow! You sure have been busy today….
You write and write…
And it is all so so good!
I love the mystery…keep them coming….
I don’t believe you are lost. I believe you know exactly where you are….
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Thank you!
I was lost but now have a compass bearing which is a start! π
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To be found you have to be lost
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Very true and I was very lost in a very dark place, but found a trail out……..
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I’m sorry… I’m glad you found the trail…
I’m just finding my trail, and it is hard to trust it.
We get accustomed to the dark, and want to stay with what we are familiar with…
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Please there is nothing to apologise for. Iβve found my trail and Iβm just working my way along it to see where it leads to.
I hope you find the right trail for you soon π
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Thank you…I hope it leads to a good place…
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Iβm sure it will π
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unable to find the right words — This will have to suffice — I especially love this — it affects me emotionally
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Iβm glad you liked π
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Again Stuart, you express places where I have been. Even with the Lord in my life, I’ve had to allow Him to take to these very deep dark places. Sexual abuse by a parent so very young leaves such deep unrealized scares amongst other abuses….
This brought me to tears, I can so relate to this piece.
Lord bless you…..He is the Light to bring us to the end of that very dark tunnel!
You’ve inspired me to express what I’ve experienced in my life, and how the Lord brought me through. Sorry for this being so long…
In His Love…
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Thank you for sharing your words, and Iβm so glad you liked the piece π
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Stuart, would you mind if I share this piece on my blog, to give you honor in inspiring me to share how this affected me and how it relates?
Thank you…..
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Of course you can, I would be happy if you did π
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Thank you for your kindness…….
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Love this. I am no stranger to the darkness. In my experience it can be suffocating, or have treasures within it. Those two eyes got to me a bit though π
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Thank you. Iβm no stranger to darkness either, it seems for some of us our ever faithful companion……! π
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I know. And I want to thank you for pulling me out of a hole yesterday. Your kind good humour made me laugh again, and saw me through. Thankyou. π
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Youβre welcome, we all need a helping hand sometimes π
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We sure do. π
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Very well expressed. Good imagination can make things wonders.
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Thank you again! π
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