The Veil

Poetry by PerditusOctober 31, 2020October 30, 2020

As her sandals walk

the dusty trail

Her mind is hidden

behind her veil

🌑

They say she has

a heart of thorns

They shout

she is daemon born

🌑

She is just a girl

lost in time

The subject

of this little rhyme

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blindzanygirl on July 1, 2020 at 12:55 pm
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I really love this Stuart. It is kind of mysterious. Just love it

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1. Stuart on July 1, 2020 at 12:56 pm
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Falcon of valley on July 1, 2020 at 3:57 pm
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Lovely 💖

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1. Stuart on July 1, 2020 at 4:11 pm
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  Thank you 😊
  
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yellowdaisies3 on July 1, 2020 at 7:00 pm
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I love your writing. You should gather your poems and get them published in a book.

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1. Stuart on July 1, 2020 at 7:08 pm
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  Thank you for your lovely words!
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ankushmaster on July 1, 2020 at 7:25 pm
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just amazing

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1. Stuart on July 1, 2020 at 7:26 pm
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Halbarbera on July 2, 2020 at 3:27 pm
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A lovely rhyme in time saves nign

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1. Stuart on July 2, 2020 at 3:27 pm
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  😊
  
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d.a.simpsonwriter on July 2, 2020 at 3:40 pm
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Exquisitely evoked

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1. Stuart on July 2, 2020 at 3:45 pm
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  1. d.a.simpsonwriter on July 2, 2020 at 4:57 pm
    
    It’s a pleasure
    
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  2. Stuart on July 2, 2020 at 5:17 pm
    
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scifihammy on August 24, 2020 at 12:22 pm
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Very nicely written. 😀

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1. Stuart on August 24, 2020 at 12:49 pm
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  Thank you 😊
  
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Chocoviv on August 24, 2020 at 8:31 pm
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She is walking in her own path….

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1. Stuart on August 24, 2020 at 8:36 pm
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  Very much so 😊
  
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SRIKANTH on October 31, 2020 at 3:17 am
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Quite inspiring poem 👍🤝

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1. Stuart on October 31, 2020 at 10:10 am
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