Dwelling Deep

by PerditusNovember 10, 2020November 10, 2020

The monster lurks

dwelling deep

Be wary those

who carelessly sleep

🌑

Rising from the depths

silently stalking its prey

It’s enormous tentacles

ready to smash and flay

🌑

The Kraken

myth, legend or more

The truth may come

to unlucky souls offshore

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blindzanygirl on November 10, 2020 at 8:02 am
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Better watch out then

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1. Stuart on November 10, 2020 at 8:07 am
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  😊
  
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d.a.simpsonwriter on November 10, 2020 at 11:11 am
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A fabulous magnificent weave…

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1. Stuart on November 10, 2020 at 11:12 am
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  Thank you 😊
  
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Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh on November 10, 2020 at 4:22 pm
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I’m in love with this pic, nice poem.

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1. Stuart on November 10, 2020 at 4:34 pm
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  Thank you 😊
  
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Efrona Mor on November 10, 2020 at 6:45 pm
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Well written.. I enjoyed it..

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1. Stuart on November 10, 2020 at 6:47 pm
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  Thank you 😊
  
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Carolyn Page on November 10, 2020 at 7:13 pm
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I’ve never been a fan of boats/ships. 🙂
Wonderful weave!

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1. Stuart on November 10, 2020 at 7:21 pm
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  Thank you! 😊
  
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mastermixmovies on November 11, 2020 at 4:42 am
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Haunting, but a great poem as always.

P.S. My review is up in case you didn’t see it. I just had technical difficulties.

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1. Stuart on November 11, 2020 at 7:05 am
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  Thank you 😊
  
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Jeff Flesch on November 11, 2020 at 6:04 am
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Fantastic! 🙂

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1. Stuart on November 11, 2020 at 7:06 am
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  Thank you Jeff! 😊
  
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  1. Jeff Flesch on November 12, 2020 at 3:33 am
    
    Welcome! 🙂
    
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  2. Stuart on November 12, 2020 at 7:12 am
    
    😊
    
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coolcatlover808 on November 11, 2020 at 5:24 pm
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AWESOME!!

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1. Stuart on November 12, 2020 at 7:12 am
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cheriewhite on February 1, 2021 at 4:15 am
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Love this! And they still better watch out! I have a funny feeling it ain’t over yet! 🙂

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