
The water
flows gently
the mood
is a torrent
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The stream
is peaceful
the mind
is a storm
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The ripple
is relaxing
the emotion
is overwhelming
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To be a stream
Just a few rambling pieces of poetry
The water
flows gently
the mood
is a torrent
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The stream
is peaceful
the mind
is a storm
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The ripple
is relaxing
the emotion
is overwhelming
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To be a stream
We are always the stream but most of the time we don’t see it that way.
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I like to think that too ๐
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Lovely poem. I always find a sheltered stream like this very peaceful. ๐
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Thank you ๐. I find the same with streams. They can be magical in their own way.
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Absolutely. ๐
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If only my thoughts and feelings could be like leaves going along that stream….
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That would be a dream! ๐
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amazing poem โบ
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Thank you ๐
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The stream goes with the flow ๐ Great poem!
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๐ Thank you! ๐
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My interpretation is different. I see what we present to others as the calm and babbling stream. What lies beneath the surface may be a different world of undercurrents and unseen emotion. Wonderful contrasting imagery.
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I must admit Iโm a bit like a swan, calm on the exterior in person but flapping frantically underwater. Or maybe the ugly duckling….๐
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Very beautiful and peaceful. The picture is delightful too โค
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You’re welcome
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Lovely! ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐
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Thank you! ๐
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Beautiful essence of nature.๐คฉ๐
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this is simple, but effective. Reading it, I felt myself being pulled along by the flowing water. Nicely expressed.
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Yes, be water. Always water.
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Always water! ๐
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Said so perfectly! Nice poem
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Thank you! ๐
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Love this!
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Thank you! ๐
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A very good imagery… And poem, in totality. ๐
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Thank you! ๐
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In a steam where deers and other animals do pee!
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Good poem otherwise…
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Beautiful
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Pleasure
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Stuart……I hear you…….
Sometimes in an emotional, mental torment, the quiet of the babbling brook, can give no rest to the soul…….
Wonderfully expressed.
Thank you!
Oh by the way, thanks for liking my new posting……
Have a blessed week!
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Stuart!!! I love this. So beautiful!!! Thank You!!! ๐
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Youโre welcome and thank you! ๐
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My pleasure! ๐
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Beautiful, Stuart!
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Thank you Cherie ๐
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Nice. Lovely photo. I like listening to stream sounds when Iโm trying to sleep
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Thank you, I agree stream sounds are so relaxing ๐
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Hello I am nominating you for the liebster award ๐โฅ๏ธ๐ธ๐งโโ๏ธ
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Thank you! ๐
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Hello Stuart. Good morning. I am nominating you for the sunshine blogger award. Accept this.
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This is so peaceful ๐
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you ๐
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